PS - please critique! Forum
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PS - please critique!
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Last edited by asdfjk11 on Wed Jan 18, 2017 9:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: PS - please critique!
1. Typo - "would met"
2. I would remove "formal" from last paragraph. Sounds like you are implying that you have all the knowledge you need, but just need JD after your name.
Overall pretty neutral.
2. I would remove "formal" from last paragraph. Sounds like you are implying that you have all the knowledge you need, but just need JD after your name.
Overall pretty neutral.