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PS - please critique!

Post by asdfjk11 » Mon Jan 16, 2017 4:43 pm

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Re: PS - please critique!

Post by DrGlennRichie » Mon Jan 16, 2017 5:11 pm

1. Typo - "would met"

2. I would remove "formal" from last paragraph. Sounds like you are implying that you have all the knowledge you need, but just need JD after your name.

Overall pretty neutral.

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