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Need PS Feedback

Postby Anonymous User » Sat Oct 08, 2016 4:27 pm

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Last edited by Anonymous User on Tue Oct 11, 2016 4:38 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Need PS Feedback

Postby Mr. Archer » Sat Oct 08, 2016 5:33 pm

When I copy this into Word, it comes out as about two-and-a-half pages. If it were an interesting story, that might be ok. But it was kind of slow process getting thought it, and it doesn't have a clear point for a while. All I really get from this is that you took philosophy in college but searched for the area of philosophy you liked most. You also like learning about the law and wrote a paper about it. It's good you like learning and the law, because that's what you do in law school. But I think there's got to be a better way to show more or your personality. You should at least think about shortening the the part that's purely about philosophy. It's borderline rambling.

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Re: Need PS Feedback

Postby Anonymous User » Sat Oct 08, 2016 6:35 pm

Thanks for the feedback Mr. Archer. I'm assuming you're saying cut the part about the divergent camps in moral philosophy.

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Re: Need PS Feedback

Postby Mr. Archer » Sat Oct 08, 2016 7:50 pm

Yes, I'm saying you should think about cutting that part. I'm also saying it's a grind getting through the statement in general.



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