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- Mr. Archer
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When I copy this into Word, it comes out as about two-and-a-half pages. If it were an interesting story, that might be ok. But it was kind of slow process getting thought it, and it doesn't have a clear point for a while. All I really get from this is that you took philosophy in college but searched for the area of philosophy you liked most. You also like learning about the law and wrote a paper about it. It's good you like learning and the law, because that's what you do in law school. But I think there's got to be a better way to show more or your personality. You should at least think about shortening the the part that's purely about philosophy. It's borderline rambling.
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