Law School Personal Statement

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TheSS
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Law School Personal Statement

Postby TheSS » Mon Jun 15, 2015 9:17 pm

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CanadianWolf
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Re: Law School Personal Statement

Postby CanadianWolf » Mon Jun 15, 2015 9:25 pm

Sorry, but the second personal statement is too long & boring to read completely. The first statement is much better, in my opinion.

P.S. Also, the last two sentences of your second effort reveals that you do not understand the role of judges in the American legal system.

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Re: Law School Personal Statement

Postby TheSS » Sat Jun 20, 2015 10:01 pm

Thank you.

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Re: Law School Personal Statement

Postby TheSS » Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:30 am

CanadianWolf wrote:Sorry, but the second personal statement is too long & boring to read completely. The first statement is much better, in my opinion.

P.S. Also, the last two sentences of your second effort reveals that you do not understand the role of judges in the American legal system.


I take your point on length. However, I do think there are examples of judges failing to protect vulnerable clients. I also believe that everyone involved in the just adjudication of an issue has a stake in protecting vulnerable individuals involved in the legal process.




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