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alaird21 wrote:it's too focused on your father and not enough on you. it reads more like a letter of recommendation for you father than your personal statement. just my 2 cents
This was the general feeling I had as well after re-reading it. I do like the general topic, however. Maybe I should cut back on some of his character info and/or link it more clearly to mine?
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