First draft of my personal statement

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Egzon
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First draft of my personal statement

Postby Egzon » Mon Dec 22, 2014 3:40 pm

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bennep311
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Re: First draft of my personal statement

Postby bennep311 » Mon Dec 22, 2014 7:48 pm

Might this better be a diversity statement rather than a PS?

Egzon
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Re: First draft of my personal statement

Postby Egzon » Mon Dec 22, 2014 8:04 pm

Thanks for your comment.

Well, I think it shows how much I've improved, how much my greatuncle was an influence, what I achieved, so I think it portrays the obstacles I overcame and that's kind of what the theme I wanted. I know it might overlap with my diversity statement a little bit but my diversity statement is more about the challenges I faced as an immigrant in two countries whereas my personal statement is my "personal" growth over the years...

Egzon
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Re: First draft of my personal statement

Postby Egzon » Sun Dec 28, 2014 6:37 pm

A little bump.

I'm editing it a little bit but this is pretty much the draft I think I'm going to submit.




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