Diversity Statement Critique - Southwest Latino URM Forum

[starry eyed]

you'll probably make the adcomms laugh out loud at some of the slang language in this ds. that has to count for something, whether that's a positive or a negative is a mystery.... probably negative

and also you think zero colloquialisms? I don't have space to explain what a cholo is, and saying gangbanger or something like that sounds even worse

FML

I think the colloquialisms are fine.