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Arad

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PS Critique (Interest in Medical Law)?

Post by Arad » Mon Sep 01, 2014 2:45 pm

Would anyone be interested in critiquing my PS or swapping PS's?

Topic: How greed can lead to the progressive degradation of the healthcare system.

Edit: topic is actually how I learned that greed can lead to the progressive degradation of society through my experiences in the healthcare industry and how that stimulated my interest in medical law.
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Re: PS Critique (Interest in Medical Law)?

Post by farfromthetree » Mon Sep 01, 2014 3:10 pm

I believe the PS is supposed to be about you, not necessarily your thoughts on a particular issue.

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Arad

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Re: PS Critique (Interest in Medical Law)?

Post by Arad » Mon Sep 01, 2014 4:28 pm

I should have been more specific, the essay is about how I learned that greed can lead to the progressive degradation of society through my experiences working at a pharmacy that was under dea investigation and shadowing a urologist who's peers were involved in malpractice suits for treating patients unnecessarily for disease states that are more effectively approached through routine monitoring.

I don't talk about law in the essay except for in how it's relevant to my career goals. The essay itself is more of a discussion of ethical issues I encountered in the healthcare system

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