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LOCI---is this sentence clear enough?

Post by Anonymous User » Sat Apr 12, 2014 8:23 pm

I'm sending a LOCI to my top choice, where I've been wait listed. It's the only law school in the city A, but I'm still not sure if I'm clear enough here when saying that I'll attend if accepted.

Does the sentence below make it unambiguous that I'd attend if accepted?

"School A is by far my top choice, and if I am offered a spot I assure you that I will see you in city A this fall."

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Re: LOCI---is this sentence clear enough?

Post by Pancakes12 » Sat Apr 12, 2014 8:27 pm

Anonymous User wrote:I'm sending a LOCI to my top choice, where I've been wait listed. It's the only law school in the city A, but I'm still not sure if I'm clear enough here when saying that I'll attend if accepted.

Does the sentence below make it unambiguous that I'd attend if accepted?

"School A is by far my top choice, and if I am offered a spot I assure you that I will see you in city A this fall."
This place has the most neurotic people ever. Yes, OP, it's clear.

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Re: LOCI---is this sentence clear enough?

Post by Anonymous User » Sat Apr 12, 2014 8:30 pm

I swear I'm only neurotic when it comes to law school stuff :lol:

Thanks pancakes

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Re: LOCI---is this sentence clear enough?

Post by chizzy » Sat Apr 12, 2014 8:36 pm

Pancakes12 wrote:
Anonymous User wrote:I'm sending a LOCI to my top choice, where I've been wait listed. It's the only law school in the city A, but I'm still not sure if I'm clear enough here when saying that I'll attend if accepted.

Does the sentence below make it unambiguous that I'd attend if accepted?

"School A is by far my top choice, and if I am offered a spot I assure you that I will see you in city A this fall."
This place has the most neurotic people ever. Yes, OP, it's clear.
+1
I blame this on TLS

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