PS Final-After incorporating your suggestions! Any thoughts?

(Personal Statement Examples, Advice, Critique, . . . )
JVrva
Posts: 23
Joined: Sun Dec 22, 2013 5:23 pm

PS Final-After incorporating your suggestions! Any thoughts?

Postby JVrva » Sun Jan 05, 2014 3:48 pm

Deleted
Last edited by JVrva on Tue Jan 07, 2014 8:41 pm, edited 1 time in total.

User avatar
scoobysnax
Posts: 208
Joined: Fri Nov 15, 2013 3:51 pm

Re: PS Final-After incorporating your suggestions! Any thoughts?

Postby scoobysnax » Sun Jan 05, 2014 11:09 pm

MUCH better! It seems a little long though- is this within page limit?

I would try reading it aloud to for flow, but otherwise, much improved! Congrats!

JVrva
Posts: 23
Joined: Sun Dec 22, 2013 5:23 pm

Re: PS Final-After incorporating your suggestions! Any thoughts?

Postby JVrva » Tue Jan 07, 2014 8:39 pm

Thank you for all of your feedback. I made a few additional edits after I read it aloud. It is within page limit for the majority of the schools I am applying to (2-3 pages). However I need to cut it down to two pages for others. Again, thank you!!




Return to “Law School Personal Statements”

Who is online

The online users are hidden on this forum.