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Postby Anonymous User » Thu Nov 14, 2013 2:54 pm

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jabberwocky_phlegm
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Re: DS, trying to send this out today..how does it look?

Postby jabberwocky_phlegm » Fri Nov 15, 2013 6:40 am

just my opinion, but I think the last sentence is kind of implied by the fact that you're writing a DS.

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Re: DS, trying to send this out today..how does it look?

Postby lawschool2014hopeful » Fri Nov 15, 2013 11:56 pm

fairly weak/obvious PS. It tell me nothing other than what I will already know. You are an immigrant, and you went to different schools. You didnt provide any examples as to how you suffered/overcame those cultural differences other than an "eventually"




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