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Draft 1, not complete, but please, shred it apart!...

Posted: Thu Oct 31, 2013 8:58 pm
by Anonymous User
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Re: Draft 1, not complete, but please, shred it apart!...

Posted: Thu Oct 31, 2013 9:04 pm
by Hipster but Athletic
I stopped reading after you opened up with an action hook. This isn't erotica. This isn't a 7th grade creative writing assignment. Tell them about you and why you want to go to law school

Re: Draft 1, not complete, but please, shred it apart!...

Posted: Thu Oct 31, 2013 9:12 pm
by Anonymous User
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Re: Draft 1, not complete, but please, shred it apart!...

Posted: Thu Oct 31, 2013 9:19 pm
by Anonymous User
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