First Draft, Help Would Be Greatly Appreciated

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First Draft, Help Would Be Greatly Appreciated

Postby Anonymous User » Tue Sep 24, 2013 1:12 pm

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Thanks for the help!
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Re: First Draft, Help Would Be Greatly Appreciated

Postby FluffMonster » Tue Sep 24, 2013 3:49 pm

Your PS was very well written. I feel like I really know you more as a person, so I would say mission accomplished. Whether or not you plan to pursue law in the states or back in South Korea is still up in the air, though. You could enlighten the admissions officer, but I think with your stats and this PS you'll get in everywhere you apply, regardless.

On a side note, my uncle is from South Korea, but he went to international school so perhaps his experiences were different. Your description of the country's materialism makes me view the pictures he's shown me from Seoul in a totally different light.




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