NRA rewrite !!!

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anubis1911
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NRA rewrite !!!

Postby anubis1911 » Fri Sep 06, 2013 11:43 pm

nvm
Last edited by anubis1911 on Mon Sep 09, 2013 11:24 am, edited 1 time in total.

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jselson
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Re: NRA rewrite !!!

Postby jselson » Sat Sep 07, 2013 5:59 pm

No offense, but I stopped reading after the pretentious first clause; others might have more luck.

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RELIC
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Re: NRA rewrite !!!

Postby RELIC » Sat Sep 07, 2013 6:06 pm

This is pretty bad. I honestly don't want to take the time to break it all down but lets just say the content (rather than the mechanics or grammar) is what really needs work.

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Re: NRA rewrite !!!

Postby californiauser » Sat Sep 07, 2013 8:49 pm

I think you should take some time to reconsider who your audience is. I'm not sure what you've provided is, well, what anybody in an admissions office wants to read.




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