Very FIRST rough draft - Feminism

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luuma

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Very FIRST rough draft - Feminism

Postby luuma » Tue Aug 20, 2013 7:48 pm

thanks
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Postby westjr » Tue Aug 20, 2013 9:55 pm

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Re: Very FIRST rough draft - Feminism

Postby blsingindisguise » Wed Aug 28, 2013 3:11 pm

I agree you could shorten the part about the family past/grandmother, but I wouldn't cut too much because I think it's compelling and it comes through that these family stories are important to you and part of your identity.



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