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If you want anyone to get past the first sentence, you need to change it immediately. You sound like James and the Giant Peach. (No offense, just being honest.)
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- Joined: Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:32 am
Appreciate the honesty, got rid of the first couple of sentences. Slow day at work and I have been playing around with alot of ideas.
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