I'm ready, comments and crits please

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onionskin

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I'm ready, comments and crits please

Postby onionskin » Thu Jan 31, 2013 12:29 pm

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Jack86

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Re: I'm ready, comments and crits please

Postby Jack86 » Thu Jan 31, 2013 1:04 pm

the last sentence should be want to become, not wanted. ill reread it and give some better feedback



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