Anybody feel like reading my PS? Critiques?

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NontradFL
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Anybody feel like reading my PS? Critiques?

Postby NontradFL » Fri Jan 04, 2013 4:46 pm

Removed statement for editing
Last edited by NontradFL on Sat Jan 05, 2013 1:33 pm, edited 1 time in total.

TrustInMusic
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Re: Anybody feel like reading my PS? Critiques?

Postby TrustInMusic » Sat Jan 05, 2013 2:04 am

Very interesting PS. It definitely flowed from start to finish. The only concern I have is that it covers too much. However, being an older applicant with more life experiences, I can understand why you would structure your PS this way. I personally enjoyed it a lot. I don't have experience critiquing PSs, so my words might not ultimately be helpful, but perhaps I would go more in depth in certain experiences instead of going through a quick survey of your life history.

I really hope I helped in any way.

NontradFL
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Re: Anybody feel like reading my PS? Critiques?

Postby NontradFL » Sat Jan 05, 2013 1:41 pm

Thanks for the advice. It's very well received. In fact I was feeling a bit of the same things myself. I've decided to rewrite it. Thanks.




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