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Anonymous User wrote:As a juvenile, I was cited twice for disorderly conduct. I'm not sure about this comma. If you're not either you can scour OWL or put "as a juvenile" at the end. Both offenses happened within a six month period. I'm not sure why you have that detail. I don't know much about C&F but it strikes me you should either give the exact dates or leave this out altogether.
As an immature teenager, I was associating myself with the wrong people.I took responsibility for my actions and paid the fine for the citation. Anything else? Probation? Community service? Both of the offenses have been expunged from my record.
When I was twenty years old, I was cited for a minor in consumption of alcohol.
I was walking home from a friend’s house when I was stopped and asked to take a Breathalyzer. I admitted that I was drinking and was fully cooperative.I was placed into a diversionary program and the offense was removed from my record.
Am I supposed to put more details about the disorderly conducts? I requested the docket transcript and the only thing listed is the charge of disorder conduct hazardous/ phsyi off. There is no details about the events and I would rather not specify.
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