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Re: Please Edit PS!

Postby laxbrah420 » Wed Dec 19, 2012 3:41 am

nevermind
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Re: Please Edit PS!

Postby bluepenguin » Wed Dec 19, 2012 3:42 am

The writing is technically good, but just somewhat inelegant, particularly after the second paragraph. The conclusion is very weak. You could just ditch it for schools that accept purely personal statements. Otherwise you'll need to address why law school is a logical step for you more convincingly.




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