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h2opolo

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Character and Fitness

Post by h2opolo » Tue Nov 20, 2012 6:14 pm

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Re: Character and Fitness

Post by cynthiad » Tue Nov 20, 2012 6:23 pm

If I recall correctly, the bottle was empty and it belonged to your roommate? You can mention this very briefly--just put "empty" in front of "alcohol bottle." This also makes it more clear why you didn't think it was a violation, because if it was a full bottle and you were underage you would have realized it was a violation.
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Re: Character and Fitness

Post by h2opolo » Tue Nov 20, 2012 6:31 pm

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Re: Character and Fitness

Post by WhiteyCakes » Tue Nov 20, 2012 6:53 pm

The sentence "I did legitimately violate school policy" is a little awkward. You might want to rephrase or delete that sentence. Otherwise, this looks fine.
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