Feedback on a rough PS please. The more brutal the better!

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Feedback on a rough PS please. The more brutal the better!

Postby Anonymous User » Tue Oct 09, 2012 9:57 pm

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Re: Feedback on a rough PS please. The more brutal the better!

Postby Younger Abstention » Wed Oct 10, 2012 12:53 am

Please, please, please just come right out and say that it's your mom doing the work, in the first sentence: "My mother decided to change the legal environment..." More powerful, and less confusing/awkward. The rest isn't incredible, but it's probably sufficient.




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