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Edited PS

Postby eyescream » Tue Oct 09, 2012 6:01 pm

Thanks for the help!
Last edited by eyescream on Thu Oct 11, 2012 9:34 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Edited PS

Postby eyescream » Wed Oct 10, 2012 9:30 am

Just a bump. Be as brutal as possible. If anyone wants to swap statements, feel free to send me one.

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Re: Edited PS

Postby suzige » Wed Oct 10, 2012 9:42 am

nice... reminds me of my own experiences in the newsroom 8)

Maybe add something about what happens in that case involving the drunk cop or at least address what doesn't happen.

Also, throw in the actual headline on the newspaper where u talk about being the only paper with the source. Makes it more real. But don't add it here if ur looking for anonymity.

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Re: Edited PS

Postby eyescream » Wed Oct 10, 2012 12:08 pm

Good suggestions. Thanks much for them.

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Re: Edited PS

Postby eyescream » Wed Oct 10, 2012 8:57 pm

Gunna bump one last time before the night's over then I'll hit up some rewrites. Thanks again.




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