Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft

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hellohi
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Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft

Postby hellohi » Mon Sep 24, 2012 9:54 pm

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Last edited by hellohi on Sun Sep 30, 2012 1:54 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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FattyMcFatFat
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Re: Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft

Postby FattyMcFatFat » Mon Sep 24, 2012 10:08 pm

I won't comment on grammar or anything like that, but I really like the point/concept of the fourth paragraph.

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Richie Tenenbaum
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Re: Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft

Postby Richie Tenenbaum » Mon Sep 24, 2012 10:11 pm

I really enjoyed the content. I'll let others offer specific grammar suggestions/fixes.

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Re: Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft

Postby hellohi » Sat Sep 29, 2012 10:41 pm

Thanks for the positive feedback guys, I'm glad you like the content.

Does anyone have any grammar tips?




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