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Postby Anonymous User » Wed Sep 12, 2012 11:09 pm

Thanks for the thoughts, all. That was all I needed.
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Lincoln
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Re: Pretty rough stuff

Postby Lincoln » Wed Sep 12, 2012 11:15 pm

Sounds like you want to be a mathematician.

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Re: Pretty rough stuff

Postby Anonymous User » Wed Sep 12, 2012 11:17 pm

Haha, I was going for more of the "hey here's something about me that doesn't come through in the rest of my app angle," rather than the "this is why i want to be X" angle, but point well taken, thanks.

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Re: Pretty rough stuff

Postby rinkrat19 » Wed Sep 12, 2012 11:32 pm

Normally I don't push the 'why law' theme on people, but I think this is a case where reader is left thinking, 'that was pretty cool. Why does he want to study law, not math?'

Maybe write the end to express something like "law is another pure language that I would like to learn" or something?

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Re: Pretty rough stuff

Postby darkarmour » Wed Sep 12, 2012 11:33 pm

Agreed with the above. Why not some other field?

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Re: Pretty rough stuff

Postby Anonymous User » Wed Sep 12, 2012 11:35 pm

rinkrat19 wrote:Normally I don't push the 'why law' theme on people, but I think this is a case where reader is left thinking, 'that was pretty cool. Why does he want to study law, not math?'

Maybe write the end to express something like "law is another pure language that I would like to learn" or something?


That actually just gave me an idea of how I might be able to tie it together. Thanks very much.

Anybody else's input is more than welcome, though.




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