I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

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angua
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I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby angua » Sat Jul 07, 2012 11:38 pm

Used to be a writing tutor, enjoy this stuff, bored, willing to help the eager 0Ls. Post to thread or PM if interested!

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby bernaldiaz » Sat Jul 07, 2012 11:52 pm

I'm trying to get something done over the next couple weeks. Would love to take you up on your offer then!

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby angua » Sun Jul 08, 2012 12:02 am

bernaldiaz wrote:I'm trying to get something done over the next couple weeks. Would love to take you up on your offer then!


PM away, my dear friend! (at your leisure of course)

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby jp2013 » Sun Jul 08, 2012 9:42 am

After next week I'll be living a Buddhist temple for about a month and I'll finally have the time to start on mine. Are you willing to take on a second?

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby angua » Sun Jul 08, 2012 10:07 am

jp2013 wrote:After next week I'll be living a Buddhist temple for about a month and I'll finally have the time to start on mine. Are you willing to take on a second?

Sure.

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby screaming_meemies » Sun Jul 08, 2012 10:10 am

Maybe a third as well?

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby angua » Sun Jul 08, 2012 10:15 am

screaming_meemies wrote:Maybe a third as well?


Just keep 'em coming, dudes. If I can't take any more I'll say so in this thread but unless and until I do that feel free to assume that I won't get mad if you PM me. :)

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby Ramsey » Sun Jul 08, 2012 10:25 am

Can mine be fourth on the list? (I also have a DS if you don't mind...)

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby angua » Sun Jul 08, 2012 6:15 pm

I just gotta say, all y'all are really interesting people. Feel free to keep 'em coming :)

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby Jonathk1 » Mon Jul 09, 2012 6:58 pm

Can you critique an Addendum?

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby angua » Mon Jul 09, 2012 7:39 pm

Jonathk1 wrote:Can you critique an Addendum?


Sure, why not.

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby Jonathk1 » Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:36 pm

Sent one your way! Thanks.

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby Ialdabaoth » Tue Jul 10, 2012 12:37 am

This is a bit different, but would you take a look at a paralegal cover letter? Definitely understand if you don't want to since it's much more boring than a good personal statement, haha. I think I'm going to make a separate post too. Thanks!

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Re: I'm volunteering to critique PSs for style and content

Postby angua » Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:44 pm

All right y'all, I have a bunch to work on right now so I'm not gonna take new requests for now. If you already PM'd me I'll get to you and maybe open this back up when I get through those. Cheers!




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