A PS about Story-Telling. Help, please! :)

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Miss_Sunshine
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A PS about Story-Telling. Help, please! :)

Postby Miss_Sunshine » Thu Feb 02, 2012 9:39 am

Deleted. If you would like to look it over and provide constructive feedback, send me a PM. Thanks! :)
Last edited by Miss_Sunshine on Thu Feb 02, 2012 10:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: A PS about Story-Telling. Help, please! :)

Postby stargazin » Thu Feb 02, 2012 4:51 pm

I think it's great and unique.

Answers to your questions:
-I think choosing two concrete instances like you have is better than briefly mentioning many
-No, not too abstract

I don't have any suggestions...great job!

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Re: A PS about Story-Telling. Help, please! :)

Postby Miss_Sunshine » Thu Feb 02, 2012 5:11 pm

Thank you, stargazin!

I felt pretty solidly about my diversity statement and addendum, but for some reason, the personal statement is so mystical that I wasn't certain I was walking the right path. :)

I'll keep the draft up for a few more hours, so if anyone else wants to pipe in... I'd like you (it's a deep like, though) forever!




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