Personal Statement draft -- could use some help

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postn0bills
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Personal Statement draft -- could use some help

Postby postn0bills » Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:26 pm

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Re: Personal Statement draft -- could use some help

Postby cutecarmel » Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:41 pm

I like it a lot. It speaks about you, why you are unique, and how you have overcome struggles in your life and how that has caused you to grow. A bit of advice:

- Take out the bit about winning battles against your brother, and the other battles for that matter. I would start with: I have won many battles, but the most important battle in my life...

- I want to advocate for those who cannot do so for themselves

If you are going to mention the law school, make it sound more sincere than a simple "shout-out" to get the schools name in.




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