Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

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aarias11
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Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby aarias11 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 3:20 am

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Re: Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby Curious1 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 3:21 am

Not sure if srs...

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Re: Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby Tom Joad » Mon Oct 31, 2011 3:53 am

I too know this feeling, and subliminally it may be the very reason I want to be a lawyer, but I don't know if it makes for an effective PS because many members of admissions staffs may be too old to have played Pokemon games and they might not relate. One of my best friends used to steal Pokemon cards from me before we became friends so it is possible for "Stevens" to change.

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Re: Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby law4vus » Mon Oct 31, 2011 4:02 am

Curious1 wrote:Not sure if srs...

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Re: Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby MrPapagiorgio » Mon Oct 31, 2011 4:38 am

Pathetic troll is pathetic.

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Re: Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby shoeshine » Mon Oct 31, 2011 4:41 am

Fuck Steven.

That is all.

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Re: Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby aarias11 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:13 pm

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Re: Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby lrslayer » Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:19 pm

i see what you did there. well played sir!

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Re: Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby aarias11 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:20 pm

yo dawg I heard you like personal statements...

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Re: Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby CanadianWolf » Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:20 pm

The primary problem with your essay in the original post in this thread is that readers will envision hiring the bully Steven as their attorney, but not wimpish you.

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Re: Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby CanadianWolf » Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:27 pm

I suspect that a large part of being an addict is a refusal to deal with or to accept reality. Unfortunately, your second PS in this thread, although admirable for noble thoughts, still refuses to accept reality. Presenting yourself as overly idealistic suggests naivety, and someone with your experience should know better.

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Re: Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby kennethellenparcell » Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:27 pm

umm i think you should stick with the original post as your personal statement

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Re: Ok after 2 months I feel I can finally post it please read!

Postby aarias11 » Sun Nov 06, 2011 2:11 am

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