Rough Draft Antitrust PS

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LSHopeful91
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Rough Draft Antitrust PS

Postby LSHopeful91 » Fri Oct 28, 2011 6:01 pm

This is a first crack at a PS. I'm not really sure how it turned out. Constructive Criticism appreciated, thanks.

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NervousNelly
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Re: Rough Draft Antitrust PS

Postby NervousNelly » Fri Oct 28, 2011 6:04 pm

Good topic. Lots of long sentences. A lot of them could be cut in half.




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