Almost finished with my PS!

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daydreamer

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Almost finished with my PS!

Postby daydreamer » Thu Oct 20, 2011 9:33 pm

Thanks for your help.
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kublaikahn

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Re: Please be as critical as you can!

Postby kublaikahn » Fri Oct 21, 2011 12:05 am

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daydreamer

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Re: Please be as critical as you can!

Postby daydreamer » Fri Oct 21, 2011 12:50 pm

Thanks kublaikahn. Anyone else have any advice?

CanadianWolf

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Re: Almost finished with my PS!

Postby CanadianWolf » Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:45 am

"effect change", not "affect change" The first means to bring about change, while the second means to have an impact on change already brought about.

The first opening paragraph is better, in my opinion.

CONSIDER: "My experiences have helped me to achieve clarity through the hardships that accompany adversity."

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Re: Almost finished with my PS!

Postby daydreamer » Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:52 am

Thanks, CW. Would you recommend any more changes? Do you think it's pretty much final draft ready?

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Re: Almost finished with my PS!

Postby CanadianWolf » Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:54 am

After one read, my impression is that this is a final draft.

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Re: Almost finished with my PS!

Postby daydreamer » Sat Oct 22, 2011 11:00 am

:D Thanks, sometimes reaffirmation is all one needs.



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