Rough draft of PS- help?

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Cookie2
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Rough draft of PS- help?

Postby Cookie2 » Thu Oct 13, 2011 4:52 pm

OK here is my PS. Please destroy this in the nicest way possible.


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Re: Rough draft of PS- help?

Postby CanadianWolf » Thu Oct 13, 2011 5:10 pm

Six paragraphs to share that practical experience is valuable is unnecessary.

To be blunt, this is similiar to a high school essay on what I did during summer vacation. Your personal statement lacks depth & offers scant insight into you or your development, motivation or goals.




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