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vsanghav
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Postby vsanghav » Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:22 pm

will someone please tell me this sentence is grammatically correct with the commas in the right place? about to turn in apps and quadruple checking everything. thank you so much.

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Re: comma help!

Postby rinkrat19 » Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:25 pm

The commas are ok.

Take out 'alone.' You already say 'just humans,' so 'alone' is redundant.

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Re: comma help!

Postby vsanghav » Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:26 pm

gracias.




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