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- anna86
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- Tom Joad
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Re: Non-native speaker. I`d greatly appreciate your critique
Very compelling story. I am sorry you had to face so many unfortunate incidents and I hope you find a happier life in the US. I really liked your PS. Some people might criticize it as reading too much like a resume, but I think your jobs and positions strengthen your statement. Plus since you add so many examples of your personal reflection on your experiences I think it works well. I didn't notice any grammatical weaknesses.
Overall I am glad you are applying to a school I am not applying too, because I don't think my PS would seem very good compared to yours Good luck!
Overall I am glad you are applying to a school I am not applying too, because I don't think my PS would seem very good compared to yours Good luck!
- anna86
- Posts: 7
- Joined: Fri Sep 02, 2011 12:34 am
Re: Non-native speaker. Please help me with my PS!
Thank you so much ! To be honest I thought it`s a complete disaster) lol) Especially first three paragraphs. I`d greatly appreciate if someone could give me a detailed critique on those.