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anna86
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Postby anna86 » Thu Sep 29, 2011 3:25 pm

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Re: Non-native speaker. I`d greatly appreciate your critique

Postby Tom Joad » Thu Sep 29, 2011 3:46 pm

Very compelling story. I am sorry you had to face so many unfortunate incidents and I hope you find a happier life in the US. I really liked your PS. Some people might criticize it as reading too much like a resume, but I think your jobs and positions strengthen your statement. Plus since you add so many examples of your personal reflection on your experiences I think it works well. I didn't notice any grammatical weaknesses.

Overall I am glad you are applying to a school I am not applying too, because I don't think my PS would seem very good compared to yours :) Good luck!

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Re: Non-native speaker. Please help me with my PS!

Postby anna86 » Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:32 pm

Thank you so much :) ! To be honest I thought it`s a complete disaster) lol) Especially first three paragraphs. I`d greatly appreciate if someone could give me a detailed critique on those.




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