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Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:08 am
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I think this is quite good. It's rare that it manages to take a personal story and tie it into your law school aspirations in a very direct, meaningful way.
I don't see any huge problems as is, although a real-world example of how religious ethics and financial regulation affect each other, or a philosophical point which relates to finance, would make the idea more concrete and real.