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lsatcrazy
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Postby lsatcrazy » Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:08 am

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ahnhub
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Re: Rip my PS a new one

Postby ahnhub » Mon Sep 05, 2011 4:49 am

I think this is quite good. It's rare that it manages to take a personal story and tie it into your law school aspirations in a very direct, meaningful way.

I don't see any huge problems as is, although a real-world example of how religious ethics and financial regulation affect each other, or a philosophical point which relates to finance, would make the idea more concrete and real.

lsatcrazy
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Re: Rip my PS a new one

Postby lsatcrazy » Mon Sep 05, 2011 8:33 am

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CanadianWolf
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Re: Rip my PS a new one

Postby CanadianWolf » Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:13 pm

Aren't "greed and avarice" redundant ?

The final paragraph is weak.




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