First draft PS- Any help appreciated! Forum

Marie34 · Post by **Marie34** » Thu Jul 21, 2011 11:14 am

So got my first draft FINALLY done. It took me a while, but I finally landed on a topic focused on international human rights. I understand that its pretty choppy, so any ideas on how to make it flow better, or any comments at all, would be great

Also, I'm not sure if it's too factual, and not enough "personal". But I'll PM it to anyone who may be interested! Thanks!

chem · Post by **chem** » Thu Jul 21, 2011 11:19 am

I'll swap you if you want to read over mine

boalthopeful · Post by **boalthopeful** » Thu Jul 21, 2011 1:50 pm

im willing to swap as well

Moomoo2u · Post by **Moomoo2u** » Thu Jul 21, 2011 2:16 pm

me too

LawReader · Post by **LawReader** » Fri Jul 22, 2011 10:20 am

Feel free to PM it to me as well. Had a related topic for my personal statement, did pretty well.

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