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So got my first draft FINALLY done. It took me a while, but I finally landed on a topic focused on international human rights. I understand that its pretty choppy, so any ideas on how to make it flow better, or any comments at all, would be great Also, I'm not sure if it's too factual, and not enough "personal". But I'll PM it to anyone who may be interested! Thanks!

I'll swap you if you want to read over mine

im willing to swap as well

me too

Feel free to PM it to me as well. Had a related topic for my personal statement, did pretty well.