First draft PS- Any help appreciated!

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Marie34
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First draft PS- Any help appreciated!

Postby Marie34 » Thu Jul 21, 2011 11:14 am

So got my first draft FINALLY done. It took me a while, but I finally landed on a topic focused on international human rights. I understand that its pretty choppy, so any ideas on how to make it flow better, or any comments at all, would be great :) Also, I'm not sure if it's too factual, and not enough "personal". But I'll PM it to anyone who may be interested! Thanks!

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chem
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Re: First draft PS- Any help appreciated!

Postby chem » Thu Jul 21, 2011 11:19 am

I'll swap you if you want to read over mine

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boalthopeful
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Re: First draft PS- Any help appreciated!

Postby boalthopeful » Thu Jul 21, 2011 1:50 pm

im willing to swap as well

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Moomoo2u
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Re: First draft PS- Any help appreciated!

Postby Moomoo2u » Thu Jul 21, 2011 2:16 pm

me too

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Re: First draft PS- Any help appreciated!

Postby LawReader » Fri Jul 22, 2011 10:20 am

Feel free to PM it to me as well. Had a related topic for my personal statement, did pretty well.




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