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edit for rewrite

There are many elements to this that I did not enjoy including (from highest dislike to lowest dislike):

1.) Flow
2.) Organization
3.) Broad nature of story

I would recommend that you try to re-write it and not think about length, since you make explicit that you prefer more writing to less writing. After you've finished that draft, re-read it and decide which parts you find most favorable, then begin to cut down.

Is this the whole statement?