VERY ROUGH DIVERSITY STATEMENT

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confusedlaw
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VERY ROUGH DIVERSITY STATEMENT

Postby confusedlaw » Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:15 pm

edit for rewrite
Last edited by confusedlaw on Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.

sold123
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Re: VERY ROUGH DIVERSITY STATEMENT

Postby sold123 » Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:21 pm

There are many elements to this that I did not enjoy including (from highest dislike to lowest dislike):

1.) Flow
2.) Organization
3.) Broad nature of story

I would recommend that you try to re-write it and not think about length, since you make explicit that you prefer more writing to less writing. After you've finished that draft, re-read it and decide which parts you find most favorable, then begin to cut down.

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JaLeCa
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Re: VERY ROUGH DIVERSITY STATEMENT

Postby JaLeCa » Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:23 pm

Is this the whole statement?




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