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PS First Draft -

Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2011 9:22 pm
by Cartman516
Hey everyone. I have a first draft of a general personal statement. Essentially it's overcoming a challenge with a dash of seminal moment / chance encounter.

I have my own issues with this draft, but I don't want to influence anyone.

Anybody want to give me some feedback? I'm more than happy to return the favor!

Re: PS First Draft -

Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 9:09 am
by thederangedwang
sure, I would love too, private msg it to me, I'll also send mine to you so that I can get some feedback.

Re: PS First Draft -

Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:27 pm
by freestallion
Sure. I'd love to swap so PM me.

Re: PS First Draft -

Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 7:18 pm
by jln04a
I would be happy to read it as well.

Re: PS First Draft -

Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 12:46 pm
by Moomoo2u
What they said :)

Re: PS First Draft -

Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 5:54 pm
by curiouscat
Cartman516 wrote: overcoming a challenge with a dash of seminal moment / chance encounter.

sounds tasty, send it over

Re: PS First Draft -

Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 9:03 am
by citygirl000
PM if still interested