First draft of personal statement - critique?

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freestallion
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First draft of personal statement - critique?

Postby freestallion » Thu Jun 30, 2011 3:21 pm

Hi everyone,

I'd prefer not to post it publicly but if anyone is interested in looking over a first draft of a personal statement, please let me know! I'll PM it to you.

- It's about a travel experience (to a war zone) and how it impacted my understanding of law/justice and my interest in law school
- It's about my interest in public interest law - so I don't want to come off as too "save the world" but it really IS my true passion so I'm not sure what else to write about. Criticisms welcome.
- I'm happy to swap and read yours in response.

Let me know if you want to have a look! Thanks.

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l'aviadora
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Re: First draft of personal statement - critique?

Postby l'aviadora » Fri Jul 01, 2011 1:12 pm

I'll do it. :)

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icecold3000
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Re: First draft of personal statement - critique?

Postby icecold3000 » Fri Jul 01, 2011 1:46 pm

I would be glad to swap you. My PS is also about war zone travels . . .




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