Need honest critique on my PS

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anstone1988
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Need honest critique on my PS

Postby anstone1988 » Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:39 pm

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kublaikahn
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Re: Need honest critique on my PS

Postby kublaikahn » Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:49 pm

It's too short.

halostarbucks
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Re: Need honest critique on my PS

Postby halostarbucks » Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:59 am

Hey, give the guy a break! There are no asinine quotes to start off with, no flatulent pompous verbiage, no harrowing personal story to make the reader cringe and no starry eyed idealism. The essay gets to the point immediately and if you have a 4.0 GPA and a 180 LSAT, I would be ready to let you in!

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Re: Need honest critique on my PS

Postby CanadianWolf » Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:59 am

OP: I see your point.

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eaglemuncher
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Re: Need honest critique on my PS

Postby eaglemuncher » Fri Mar 18, 2011 11:01 am

CanadianWolf wrote:OP: I see your point.


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mac35352
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Re: Need honest critique on my PS

Postby mac35352 » Sun Mar 20, 2011 1:20 am

CanadianWolf wrote:OP: I see your point.

It had me laughing out loud!!!

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Re: Need honest critique on my PS

Postby Bartlebee06 » Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:55 pm

wordy yet riveting.




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