Last time before final grammar corrections

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drmguy
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Last time before final grammar corrections

Postby drmguy » Fri Jan 28, 2011 7:35 pm

Thanks
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Re: Last time before final grammar corrections

Postby 2011Law » Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:08 pm

Really liked it.


You said you realized that your physical goals should not be your priority three times, twice in the last paragraph. At least take out one of those in the last paragraph.

Was Prof. Flynn a former AUSA or a current one? If former, I might just include former in the title.

Good to see I'm not the only one not done with the PS. Mine isn't as good, and still needs some editing, but mind giving it a look?

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Re: Last time before final grammar corrections

Postby drmguy » Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:13 pm

I will get rid of one in the last paragraph.

Sure I'll look over yours.




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