PLEASE Shred this to pieces!!!!

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lawgirl10
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PLEASE Shred this to pieces!!!!

Postby lawgirl10 » Sun Jan 16, 2011 6:50 pm

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Last edited by lawgirl10 on Wed Jan 19, 2011 5:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.

fjsms
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Re: PLEASE Shred this to pieces!!!!

Postby fjsms » Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:02 pm

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lawgirl10
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Re: PLEASE Shred this to pieces!!!!

Postby lawgirl10 » Mon Jan 17, 2011 2:03 pm

Thanks so much for your input! I will definitely take those things into consideration..

Can anyone else give a critique? I need all the help I can get!

lawgirl10
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Re: PLEASE Shred this to pieces!!!!

Postby lawgirl10 » Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:54 pm

please!

CanadianWolf
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Re: PLEASE Shred this to pieces!!!!

Postby CanadianWolf » Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:00 pm

Your essay offers an interesting read that raises more questions about you than it answers. Although probably somewhat of a cathartic exercise for you, the overall impression is that you are still a bit lost & searching for an anchor at a late stage of your development. This personal statement suggests that a masters degree in social work or divinity is a better option.




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