Critique my PS please

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deltasigbn
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Critique my PS please

Postby deltasigbn » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:07 pm

Thanks!
Last edited by deltasigbn on Fri Jan 14, 2011 6:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.

LSATclincher
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Re: Critique my PS please

Postby LSATclincher » Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:26 pm

This didn't work. But I do agree on your theme, somewhat, of working hard to achieve your goals. And through your work, you learned to never take for granted your mental capacity.

This is the theme you stick to. But get rid of all the tiny details. You mentioned money way too much. Also, make sure you run this by someone w/ an English background before you submit since it looks like your from Canada.

Good luck.




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