Adversity Statement - any advice?

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futurelawstudent23

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Adversity Statement - any advice?

Postby futurelawstudent23 » Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:44 am

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Re: Adversity Statement - any advice?

Postby CanadianWolf » Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:00 pm

Unfortunately, your experiences are not unique so you may want to consider deleting that word from your last paragraph.
Overall your adversity statement is well written & interesting, but the last paragraph should be revised to show that you are more than the product of these tragic life occurrences.



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