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Anybody willing to critique my Final PS and DS?

Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 2:37 pm
by URMdan
After rewriting my PS and DS countless times, I finally have a final draft ready for critiquing. Any takers?

Re: Anybody willing to critique my Final PS and DS?

Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 5:07 pm
by URMdan
I need help with my last sentence. If anybody can help me drive home my PS at the very end, please PM me.