Final Draft! Hoping to get out tonight.Critiques please!!!

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cntruong
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Final Draft! Hoping to get out tonight.Critiques please!!!

Postby cntruong » Mon Nov 22, 2010 8:06 pm

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Re: Final Draft! Hoping to get out tonight.Critiques please!!!

Postby Gotti » Tue Nov 23, 2010 11:51 am

Hey we're twins. I wanna study the same thing and I went to UCI too =)


I'll look at your PS later tonight...I'm at work but I just wanted to let you know that someone cared to respond lol.

That being said, I glanced over it & noticed you say tragedy too close together at the end of the first paragraph and the beginning of the 2nd.

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Re: Final Draft! Hoping to get out tonight.Critiques please!!!

Postby cntruong » Tue Nov 23, 2010 7:33 pm

Thanks for responding. Yea, I just noticed the tragedies.. I'll change it up in my revision later. Let me know your thoughts on my paper when you have a chance. It'd be really helpful...

I'd be happy to read your PS if you'd like too! Glad there's a fellow UCI student here, I hadn't seen any.... :(

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Re: Final Draft! Hoping to get out tonight.Critiques please!!!

Postby cntruong » Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:48 pm

bump?




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